Below is a poem I wrote a few weeks ago but felt hesitant to publish at first because it occurred to me that it could lend itself to two or three different misinterpretations, each of which would be not only erroneous but rather unfortunate. I won't go into what those might be, because I don't want to color your view of the poem, especially in a bad way.
I also will not positively interpret the poem for you, because that is against my poetic religion. If asked what the poem means, I would follow the example of T. S. Eliot and repeat it back to you line by line. There is also some wisdom to poet/librarian Archibald MacLeish's dictum that "A poem should not mean, but be."
The only thing I will point out is that it makes reference to a couple of ancient myths. The poem came to me as I lay awake in the middle of the night, at least in a rudimentary form, and I wrote it down and fleshed it out the next day. I also will point out a technical feature, which is that it is meant for two voices. The lines on the right hand side are for the second voice.
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HYMN TO THE BLIND
O ye gods that know not time
I pray thee take and make her mine
I sing
I sing
I sing
With my lyre I shall pluck
The finest flower from the earth
I pray thee take and make her mine
I sing
I sing
I sing
With my lyre I shall pluck
The finest flower from the earth
Away from the sun
Away from light
With my song I shall leadThe fairest maid from light of day
Into darkness
Into night
Darkness befall her brilliant eyesThat in blesséd night she might see
Away from the sun
Away from light
Her face like snow upon still waterHer wings like sacred birds of ice
Into darkness
Into night
O ye gods that know not time
I pray thee take and make her mine
I sing
I sing
I sing
I shall lead her weak and wintry hand
To the deep secluded hallowed grove
Away from the sun
Away from light
Her tongue shall taste the pomegranateIts blood red juice shall stain her lips
Into darkness
Into night
She shall lie on a river of forgetfulnessTransported to a depthless night
Away from the sun
Away from light
I shall lead her with wounded eyesInto a dim and dreamless bliss
Into darkness
Into night
O ye gods that know not time
I pray thee take and make her mine
I sing
I sing
I sing
The daylight’s pallid blasphemy
Shall be slain by my votive lyre
Away from the sun
Away from light
She shall be the queen of nightHer eyes become a holy fire
Into darkness
Into night
I shall bestow her secret nameShe shall glow a radiant star
Away from the sun
Away from light
In her surrender made divineHer heart shall beat within mine
Into darkness
Into night
O ye gods that know not time
I pray thee take and make her mine
Away from the sun
Away from light
I sing
Into darkness
Into night
I sing
Away from the sun
Away from light
I sing***
Steven Holland
July 5, 2012
beautiful
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